Students' comments from CyberJournals & Self Assessments
One person, the only person, that I’ve met online is my Web
Pal, Stacey. She goes to a college in Texas and I believe she said she
hopes to be a teacher. In one of her classes, she is required to keep a
relationship with a student through email. The best thing about knowing
Stacey and having her as a Web Pal is the fact that I can email her my
pieces of work and ask her read them over for me. Then, she can give me
pointers and helpful tips to improve the essay or whatever the project
happens to be. Also, she can look for spelling errors and other
conventions that I don’t see. It sounds odd, but
she's sort of like a cheat sheet or a second teacher to me. Another
reason it’s great having Stacey as a Web Pal is because we have a few
things in common, which makes her fun to write to. Having a Web Pal wasn’t
required in this class, but I’m really glad I decided to do it. ~Emily
B. 2005
With Neisha
helping me with my writing, I feel like I can write more confidently. When
we were doing our poetry journals, I had a little trouble with some of my
writing. I would always say ‘it’s like the poem is saying’, and Neisha
taught me to say ‘the poem is saying’ which makes my writing sound more
confident, and sound better. Not only does my writing look [better], but I
am more confident with my writing as well. My web
pal would complement me on what I wrote, and that made me feel like I was
good at what I was doing. I am not disappointed with my web pal.
Whenever I would e-mail her and ask her for help, she always e-mailed me
back with pointers on how to make my writing sound better. I enjoyed
working with her, and she was a lot of help to me. The best part about
having her help me was when she would look over my work and tell me what I
could change to make my writing sound better. She was like a little
advantage that I had that always helped me when I asked her to. ~Sami F.
2005
So far, I have had a really great time during Web
Pals. I think that Web Pals are really fun and I like hearing other
people's feedback on my writing that have taken college level classes. It
is interesting how my web pal and I are so much alike. I am learning many
things from my web pal and really would like to keep doing this program.
Web Pals is not only fun, but it is a great learning
experience! Jackie R. 2006
The experience I've had so far
with my web pal has been good for the most part. At first it was hard to
email her because I was always so busy with projects or assignments, but
we've been able to get a few good emails back and forth. It was getting
really coincidental for awhile because our names are both Kelly, and we
ended up having a lot of things in common. For example, we both play the
flute and are interested in art. I've tried emailing her recently, but
when I try to send the email I get back a message that her account is over
quota and the email won't deliver. Kelly V. 2004
My web pal experience has been
nothing but trouble. It was pretty good in the beginning when I received
the first email. She told about herself and had some questions about me.
I sent her a long email back and told and told about myself and answered
the questions that she had asked about me. After I sent this email she
never replied back to me. Everyone else in the class had been getting
emails from there web partner except for me. I check my email daily and
never get any mail from her helping me out on my web page. This is really
disappointing because I was really looking forward to this experience. I
hope that in the future she could start emailing me again so I would be
able to get some help from her.
Trenton S. 2004
My Cyber partner experience was
not a very enjoyable one. Mainly because she only wrote me once and then
never responded again. I even wrote her an e-mail hoping that she would
write but I gave up and forgot about it. I think that if my web pal would
have shown some ambition and wrote some e-mails and started some kind of
friendship things would have been a little smoother. Whatever though, I
wasn't the only one who's web pal quit writing. A lot of the pals decided
that they didn't want to do this project anymore so I don't feel so bad.
My web also really didn't give me any advice or help with my web so that
could be an aspect that she could have helped with. I think that it is
really kind of sad that this happened with so many students and this isn't
the only year that it has happened. Hopefully next year's class will have
a better outcome than this year's. Rachel O. 2004
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